You bin's Video Reflections

This is my Video Reflections.

Tues Poem

-Rainbow-

Red is the color of sparkling noisy fire works making us surprise.
Orange is the color of fatty sweet orange.
Yellow is the color of the shiny glowing sun.
Green is the color of the softly playing grass.
Blue is the color of the cold salty sea.
Dark blue is the color of the sky when it's dinner time.
Purple is the last color of the rainbow!

Persuasive Writing Rubric

This is my persuasive writing rubric.....

Partner: Daniel K


Honestly,we really need to have hard laws for drunk drivers.
Last year, there was a girl who across the road then the drunk driver hit the girl.
Luckily, that girl was concerned.The worst thing was that drunk driver has to pay just 200 box!!
My opinion is " We need to have hard laws for drunk drivers."
Drunk drivers don't go to the jail and drunk drivers don't pay much money!! I couldn't believe it!
If we let go of drunk drivers,they would drunk and hit someone again.
That someone's family would be so sad.
Why we have laws? for nothing? NO,we have laws for make people happy and make things became fair to every one, however,like this problem people are not happy and things are not fair to every one.
These are reasons of why we should make hard laws for drunk drivers.
PLEASE! MAKE HARD LAWS FOR DRUNK DRIVERS!!

Inquiry Reflection

This is what I think about inquiry.
I think that our inquiry movie worked really well. I enjoyed making movie and filming. Also our teamwork was really great.
I think we are going to put our inquiry movie in You Tube.
Our movie is a bit wobbly,so we need to fix our movie a bit.
Maybe next time,we could work on stage lights and filming carefully.

Cute puppies