You-bin's Album

This is my portfolio for my quality work and my special things. I am really proud of myself when I see my special works.

Tuesday, December 18, 2007

Thursday, December 13, 2007

Tues Poem


Red is the color of sparkling noisy fire works making us surprise.
Orange is the color of fatty sweet orange.
Yellow is the color of the shiny glowing sun.
Green is the color of the softly playing grass.
Blue is the color of the cold salty sea.
Dark blue is the color of the sky when it's dinner time.
Purple is the last color of the rainbow!

Tuesday, December 11, 2007

Persuasive Writing Rubric

This is my persuasive writing rubric.....

Partner: Daniel K

Honestly,we really need to have hard laws for drunk drivers.
Last year, there was a girl who across the road then the drunk driver hit the girl.
Luckily, that girl was concerned.The worst thing was that drunk driver has to pay just 200 box!!
My opinion is " We need to have hard laws for drunk drivers."
Drunk drivers don't go to the jail and drunk drivers don't pay much money!! I couldn't believe it!
If we let go of drunk drivers,they would drunk and hit someone again.
That someone's family would be so sad.
Why we have laws? for nothing? NO,we have laws for make people happy and make things became fair to every one, however,like this problem people are not happy and things are not fair to every one.
These are reasons of why we should make hard laws for drunk drivers.

Monday, December 10, 2007

Inquiry Reflection

This is what I think about inquiry.
I think that our inquiry movie worked really well. I enjoyed making movie and filming. Also our teamwork was really great.
I think we are going to put our inquiry movie in You Tube.
Our movie is a bit wobbly,so we need to fix our movie a bit.
Maybe next time,we could work on stage lights and filming carefully.

Cute puppies

Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Key Competency Reflection 2007

Dream maker:* When I had Gymnastic, I couldn't do anytings in the Gymnastic but I practiced and I practiced now I could do most things and I became healthy.
*Goal Setter:I think that I have improved about goal setter,because each term I had written my goals,so that's why I became the goal setter

Team Player: When we shared our inquiry works we needed to listen to each other.

Communicator: I learnt diffrent languages and using diffrent languages so I could do two diffrent languages!!!

Thinker:I think that I created many things and I searched things for inquiry information with Clare.

Monday, November 12, 2007

Term 4 Goal - Improving English

My second goal is to improve my English. I will do this by written English by making sure that I am practicing writting like poetry and stories.Also conference my writing with my friend.
I improved because writing in ENGLISH!