Tues Poem

-Rainbow-

Red is the color of sparkling noisy fire works making us surprise.
Orange is the color of fatty sweet orange.
Yellow is the color of the shiny glowing sun.
Green is the color of the softly playing grass.
Blue is the color of the cold salty sea.
Dark blue is the color of the sky when it's dinner time.
Purple is the last color of the rainbow!

Persuasive Writing Rubric

This is my persuasive writing rubric.....

Partner: Daniel K


Honestly,we really need to have hard laws for drunk drivers.
Last year, there was a girl who across the road then the drunk driver hit the girl.
Luckily, that girl was concerned.The worst thing was that drunk driver has to pay just 200 box!!
My opinion is " We need to have hard laws for drunk drivers."
Drunk drivers don't go to the jail and drunk drivers don't pay much money!! I couldn't believe it!
If we let go of drunk drivers,they would drunk and hit someone again.
That someone's family would be so sad.
Why we have laws? for nothing? NO,we have laws for make people happy and make things became fair to every one, however,like this problem people are not happy and things are not fair to every one.
These are reasons of why we should make hard laws for drunk drivers.
PLEASE! MAKE HARD LAWS FOR DRUNK DRIVERS!!

Key Competency Reflection 2007

Dream maker:* When I had Gymnastic, I couldn't do anytings in the Gymnastic but I practiced and I practiced now I could do most things and I became healthy.
*Goal Setter:I think that I have improved about goal setter,because each term I had written my goals,so that's why I became the goal setter

Team Player: When we shared our inquiry works we needed to listen to each other.


Communicator: I learnt diffrent languages and using diffrent languages so I could do two diffrent languages!!!

Thinker:I think that I created many things and I searched things for inquiry information with Clare.

We need to have hard laws for drunk driver.

Honestly,we really need to have hard laws for drunk drivers.
Last year, there was a girl who across the road then the drunk driver hit the girl.
Luckily, that girl was concerned.The worst thing was that drunk driver has to pay just 200 box!!
My opinion is " We need to have hard laws for drunk drivers."
Drunk drivers don't go to the jail and drunk drivers don't pay much money!! I couldn't believe it!
If we let go of drunk drivers,they would drunk and hit someone again.
That someone's family would be so sad.
Why we have laws? for nothing? NO,we have laws for make people happy and make things became fair to every one, however,like this problem people are not happy and things are not fair to every one.
These are reasons of why we should make hard laws for drunk drivers.
PLEASE! MAKE HARD LAWS FOR DRUNK DRIVERS!!

Why school should wear uniforms?

Do you know why we should wear uniforms at school? I have no idea either.
School doesn't have to wear uniforms.
In winter,we have to wear school uniforms,but school uniforms are freezing.It's not warm enough to us. If we wear mufti we could wear what we want to and we are not going to be freezing or hot!
Here is another thing, if your uniforms are in the washing machine...
That would be really big problem.What can you do?
Mufti would be great clothes! You could wear what you want and there will be nothing bad happens.Well, some people may say uniforms are better,but uniforms make people look same...
This is my opinion of people don't have to wear uniforms at school.

My 3 pig's story

True story
Of
3 PIGS
by Youbin Ji
room 14
Once upon a time
there were 3 pigs living in a huge forest.
The 1st pig built his house out of straw.
That afternoon Mr. wolf came to the 1st little pig’s house made out of straw.
“Little pig,little pig.Let me come in.”
Mr. wolf said. “No, not by the hair of my chinny chin chin.” The little pig said.
“Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house in.” said Mr. wolf,
so he huffed and he puffed and he belw the house down.The 1st pig ran to the 2nd pig’s stick house.Then Mr. wolf followed the little pig to 2nd pig’s stick house.
Mr. wolf stopped at the 2nd pig’s stick house. “Little pigs,little pigs' let me come in.” The Mr. wolf said.
Little pigs said. “No , not by the hair of my chinny chin chin.”
“Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house in.” Mr. wolf said,
so he huffed and he puffed and he blew the house down.The 1st pig and the 2nd pig ran to the 3rd pig’s brick house, so Mr. wolf follow the little pigs to the 3rd pig’s brick house.Little pigs stopped.
Mr. wolf stopped too,BUT…
The 3rd pig hadn’t finished his brick house yet… So Mr. wolf ate up all of the 3 little pigs. Bye , bye you 3 little pigs!
-THE END-