You bin's Video Reflections

This is my Video Reflections.

Tues Poem

-Rainbow-

Red is the color of sparkling noisy fire works making us surprise.
Orange is the color of fatty sweet orange.
Yellow is the color of the shiny glowing sun.
Green is the color of the softly playing grass.
Blue is the color of the cold salty sea.
Dark blue is the color of the sky when it's dinner time.
Purple is the last color of the rainbow!

Persuasive Writing Rubric

This is my persuasive writing rubric.....

Partner: Daniel K


Honestly,we really need to have hard laws for drunk drivers.
Last year, there was a girl who across the road then the drunk driver hit the girl.
Luckily, that girl was concerned.The worst thing was that drunk driver has to pay just 200 box!!
My opinion is " We need to have hard laws for drunk drivers."
Drunk drivers don't go to the jail and drunk drivers don't pay much money!! I couldn't believe it!
If we let go of drunk drivers,they would drunk and hit someone again.
That someone's family would be so sad.
Why we have laws? for nothing? NO,we have laws for make people happy and make things became fair to every one, however,like this problem people are not happy and things are not fair to every one.
These are reasons of why we should make hard laws for drunk drivers.
PLEASE! MAKE HARD LAWS FOR DRUNK DRIVERS!!

Inquiry Reflection

This is what I think about inquiry.
I think that our inquiry movie worked really well. I enjoyed making movie and filming. Also our teamwork was really great.
I think we are going to put our inquiry movie in You Tube.
Our movie is a bit wobbly,so we need to fix our movie a bit.
Maybe next time,we could work on stage lights and filming carefully.

Cute puppies

Key Competency Reflection 2007

Dream maker:* When I had Gymnastic, I couldn't do anytings in the Gymnastic but I practiced and I practiced now I could do most things and I became healthy.
*Goal Setter:I think that I have improved about goal setter,because each term I had written my goals,so that's why I became the goal setter

Team Player: When we shared our inquiry works we needed to listen to each other.


Communicator: I learnt diffrent languages and using diffrent languages so I could do two diffrent languages!!!

Thinker:I think that I created many things and I searched things for inquiry information with Clare.

Term 4 Goal - Improving English

My second goal is to improve my English. I will do this by written English by making sure that I am practicing writting like poetry and stories.Also conference my writing with my friend.
I improved because writing in ENGLISH!

Feedback - your portfolio

Dear Youbin,

Your portfolio is developing well. A couple of things to improve on:

1. Can you please invite Mrs Williams and Mrs Chey to it? They are both important people who support your learning journey. Can you please do this next week (week 6 term 4) and tell me once they are members of your blog?
2. Can we please conference about your term four goals? I would like to help you describe them in more detail.

thanks,

Rob

Cute puppy

Wow!!! They are gorgerous,aren't they?

We need to have hard laws for drunk driver.

Honestly,we really need to have hard laws for drunk drivers.
Last year, there was a girl who across the road then the drunk driver hit the girl.
Luckily, that girl was concerned.The worst thing was that drunk driver has to pay just 200 box!!
My opinion is " We need to have hard laws for drunk drivers."
Drunk drivers don't go to the jail and drunk drivers don't pay much money!! I couldn't believe it!
If we let go of drunk drivers,they would drunk and hit someone again.
That someone's family would be so sad.
Why we have laws? for nothing? NO,we have laws for make people happy and make things became fair to every one, however,like this problem people are not happy and things are not fair to every one.
These are reasons of why we should make hard laws for drunk drivers.
PLEASE! MAKE HARD LAWS FOR DRUNK DRIVERS!!

Why school should wear uniforms?

Do you know why we should wear uniforms at school? I have no idea either.
School doesn't have to wear uniforms.
In winter,we have to wear school uniforms,but school uniforms are freezing.It's not warm enough to us. If we wear mufti we could wear what we want to and we are not going to be freezing or hot!
Here is another thing, if your uniforms are in the washing machine...
That would be really big problem.What can you do?
Mufti would be great clothes! You could wear what you want and there will be nothing bad happens.Well, some people may say uniforms are better,but uniforms make people look same...
This is my opinion of people don't have to wear uniforms at school.

Explaining maths strategies

Thanks for sharing your method of decomposition this morning Youbin.

You explained it really well and it helped others to understand how the strategy works.

About leaders

1.Who are a couple of great leader in history that you know about and how did they lead?
- Sun shin Lee(Korean leader) He was a great leader. He lead many people,sometimes he lead people very strongly and he makes people agree with him,but every one don't arguing with him,every one happy about it. I thought that it was really amazing because it's really hard to make people agree and lead.

Term 4 Goal - Flute

My first goal is to improve how well I play the flute. I want to improve this because I am doing orchestra and chamber group. I will do this by playing the flute every day for 20minutes.

I will know I have improved because I will have played flute every day without making many mistakes.

I will measure my progress by trying to playing a more difficult song and compare the song with one I am playing now.

Term 3 goals & Evaluation

-Term 3 goals-

-Personallity goals-

*Improve English.
*Play flute everyday. (Include Orchestra and Chamber group)
*Study hard at home.

-School goals-

*Finishing homework by the time.
*Concentrate on maths.

-Term 3 goals Evaluation-

I achieved personallity goals and school goals.
Finishing homework is achieved...
Well, I think that I am good at playing flute,but still I think that I need to practicing playing flute more and more.

Getting people to help your learning

Thanks Youbin for getting Claire and I onto your blog. Remember it is important to get people who can help you in your learning to contribute.

Make sure if anyone is giving you feedback, that they use the label 'feedback'. This will allow you to find it easily!

Have a nice weekend.

Speech evaluation

I wrote my speech about Korea,because I want to tell people about Korea.
I was really nervous that I will speech in front of our class room mates but when I started it, it wasn't really nervous.
Well... I thought that I didn't spoke clearly but every one said I spoke really clearly.
My speech time was 2minute 15 second, exactually that speech time need to be 2minute 30second, so next time I would worte my speech more longer. This is what I really want to improve next time...
Oh! I want to improve my eye contact too!!!

Wearable arts evaluation

I was really nervous that I had a Wearable arts. I was really exicted too. Well... when I made clothes with my team for the Wearable arts, we used many metrials and so on. When I used all new metrials I was really enjoying to make clothes.
I learnt team work is really important. All my team mates said they learnt team work too..
I wish I could make more clothes.
We need to improve save our time for making clothes.

Reflection

Today we watched "An inconvenient truth". I learnt that Co2 and tempreture getting highier and highier.
We all need to improve oursevles and save the earth.I think we can do something for the earth.
Because of our earth going to die and there are too many green house gases and electricity.
If I could, I really want to save the earth...Something I don't understand is moral imperative,significance,carbon dioxide and concentraion.We really need to save our earth!


By Youbin Ji

Term2 You-bin’s goals

My term2 goal is…

-School goals –
I want to understand English.
I want to make more great friends.

-Personal goals-
I want to play flute really well.
And I will draw great pictures!

-Evaluation-
I can understand English and I have many great friends.
In personal goals, I need to practice more..but I drew many great pictures!!

My 3 pig's story

True story
Of
3 PIGS
by Youbin Ji
room 14
Once upon a time
there were 3 pigs living in a huge forest.
The 1st pig built his house out of straw.
That afternoon Mr. wolf came to the 1st little pig’s house made out of straw.
“Little pig,little pig.Let me come in.”
Mr. wolf said. “No, not by the hair of my chinny chin chin.” The little pig said.
“Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house in.” said Mr. wolf,
so he huffed and he puffed and he belw the house down.The 1st pig ran to the 2nd pig’s stick house.Then Mr. wolf followed the little pig to 2nd pig’s stick house.
Mr. wolf stopped at the 2nd pig’s stick house. “Little pigs,little pigs' let me come in.” The Mr. wolf said.
Little pigs said. “No , not by the hair of my chinny chin chin.”
“Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house in.” Mr. wolf said,
so he huffed and he puffed and he blew the house down.The 1st pig and the 2nd pig ran to the 3rd pig’s brick house, so Mr. wolf follow the little pigs to the 3rd pig’s brick house.Little pigs stopped.
Mr. wolf stopped too,BUT…
The 3rd pig hadn’t finished his brick house yet… So Mr. wolf ate up all of the 3 little pigs. Bye , bye you 3 little pigs!
-THE END-

Term 2 Goal - flute

Practicing flute more hardly.

-Evaluation-
I did practicing flute very well! So I can play very well, so I am really proud of myself..